Monday, May 23, 2011

A Short Story

The Deadly Cliff
by Jake

Once upon a time there lived a boy that was a detective. He had blond hair and freckles on his face, and he was 9 years old.

He could jump realy high. So one day, he was in his office and he got a call from some miners and they said they were puting dinomite in a whole and they placed some in the wrong place. But the dinomite was poward buy a lectronik divice on top of a mountain and the dinomite would blow up at 8:00 p.m. and it was 7:30 p.m.

So the detective came to the digging site and he said he would figure out a very good slushen. He sugjested moving the dinomite, but the miners said that was to dangerus right then. So the detective said, "I'll deel with the proplem right now," and with that he jumped, he jumped to the top of the mounten.

He pressed the button and the dinomite didn't blow up. So the detective saved the day.

3 comments:

  1. What a great slushen. :)THanks for sharing. I love it!

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  2. How did he know the button WOULDN'T set it off? He was one smart detective! And I love that I can picture him perfectly by the vivid description :)

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  3. childrens minds are just amazing arent they!

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